Kia ora James my name is Te Aroha and I am a year 8 at Kawakawa Primary School. Your little story had good descriptive language which I really liked you only needed to fix a few things. Such as your explanations for your blogs. When your posting blog posts make sure to add an explanation so your viewers know what they're going to see on your blog posts. You do need to work on your presentation skills but apart from that I liked your story. I hope you use my advice to make your slides better. Can't wait to see your next post!
Kia ora James my name is Te Aroha and I am a year 8 at Kawakawa Primary School. Your little story had good descriptive language which I really liked you only needed to fix a few things. Such as your explanations for your blogs. When your posting blog posts make sure to add an explanation so your viewers know what they're going to see on your blog posts. You do need to work on your presentation skills but apart from that I liked your story. I hope you use my advice to make your slides better. Can't wait to see your next post!
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